Yesterday I wrote a post titled “Reboot.” And I posted it. Now I’m posting this one. I started writing something else today but didn’t post it. “You need to finish and post this instead,” said God. And She pointed me to one of my drafts. The back story
Mike, I've read both posts and there is a lot going on in each. They work synergistically, which you naturally intended. In the original post, the backstory, I loved the different narrative POV. X3. The interplay between God, the reader, and you has dry humor, and the point comes through pitch perfect. The reboot is a great coda that swoops in with a narrative with details and more dry humor and a nice conclusion and fade out. In both, I like the "Everything is okay" vibe. Almost a little stream of consciousness going on. I'll file this under "If James Joyce Had Been Funny." And by the way, it sounds like everything is okay. And that's good. And by the way again, the message and the vibe transfer to the reader. I feel like everything is okay.
Mike, I've read both posts and there is a lot going on in each. They work synergistically, which you naturally intended. In the original post, the backstory, I loved the different narrative POV. X3. The interplay between God, the reader, and you has dry humor, and the point comes through pitch perfect. The reboot is a great coda that swoops in with a narrative with details and more dry humor and a nice conclusion and fade out. In both, I like the "Everything is okay" vibe. Almost a little stream of consciousness going on. I'll file this under "If James Joyce Had Been Funny." And by the way, it sounds like everything is okay. And that's good. And by the way again, the message and the vibe transfer to the reader. I feel like everything is okay.